I enjoyed your video clip :D It made me want to visit Germany! I think it was great that you informed the audience that the presentation is going to be divided into three parts. This was the thing that I really want to learn from you, because I also want to let my audience know how the presentation is going to be, but somehow I usually forget to do so :( I would like to suggest you one thing. In this video clip, it seems that you use the phrase 'as you can see' too much. Of course, this phrase was used in appropriate situations, however, it would have beed better if you had used different expressions instead of 'as you can see'. :D - PUHA
It was great presentation. I liked it. It was informative and full of interesting pictures that made me imagine the Germany. You also had the eye contact with the audience and well structured presentation. I agree with the "as you can see" suggestion. May be you can use other expressions like "please have a look at", "now I would like to show" or something like that. Great job. Good luck ^^ (Nam Alex)
I was one of the audience of her presentation. It was very informative and at the end of the speech, It makes me really want to go to Germany. Especially, I liked her topic because she choose the german city that are not such familiar to us unlike berlin or frankfurt... She explained very well with various pictures and specific explanation. And also, her voice was clear enough to easily understand. Thank you for interesting speech!
It was very informative like I'm traveling Germany. You prepared a lot in your speech and presentation. Also you doens't look so nervous, you look really confident and i like it. I like the way of eye contacting. :D
I enjoyed your video clip :D It made me want to visit Germany! I think it was great that you informed the audience that the presentation is going to be divided into three parts. This was the thing that I really want to learn from you, because I also want to let my audience know how the presentation is going to be, but somehow I usually forget to do so :( I would like to suggest you one thing. In this video clip, it seems that you use the phrase 'as you can see' too much. Of course, this phrase was used in appropriate situations, however, it would have beed better if you had used different expressions instead of 'as you can see'. :D - PUHA
ReplyDeleteIt was great presentation.
ReplyDeleteI liked it.
It was informative and full of interesting pictures that made me imagine the Germany.
You also had the eye contact with the audience and well structured presentation.
I agree with the "as you can see" suggestion. May be you can use other expressions like "please have a look at", "now I would like to show" or something like that.
Great job.
Good luck ^^ (Nam Alex)
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ReplyDeleteI was one of the audience of her presentation. It was very informative and at the end of the speech, It makes me really want to go to Germany. Especially, I liked her topic because she choose the german city that are not such familiar to us unlike berlin or frankfurt...
She explained very well with various pictures and specific explanation.
And also, her voice was clear enough to easily understand.
Thank you for interesting speech!
It was very informative like I'm traveling Germany. You prepared a lot in your speech and presentation. Also you doens't look so nervous, you look really confident and i like it. I like the way of eye contacting. :D
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