I enjoyed your presentation because your topic about galaxy S4 was interesting and informative. Your strong points are the appropriate sound frequency and speed path when speaking and you also seem comfortable which can be difficult for some speakers(like me). In addition, I like your conclusion especially when you said the reason why the young generation should know about Galaxy S4. However, you looked a bit much the screen so if you have put less information but more images to help us understand more, it would have been greater.
Although I'm using iPhone, your topic is interesting me because Galaxy S4 is the newest model of Galaxy series and it is the most biggest of iPhone now. I have some issues on your powerpoint slides. I think it would be better to use some images in your powerpoint slides as 이주현 said, because providing its design or new functions by images or video is much more effective to understand and impress your audience rather than providing only text. Your speed of the speech sounds moderate and enough to follow you.
I was your video recorder and the only audience. I like your speech topic because it's very interesting to me. Also your structure is well organized. It would be better if you use some hand gestures when you were speaking. Thanks for good speech! :D
I enjoyed your presentation because your topic about galaxy S4 was interesting and informative.
ReplyDeleteYour strong points are the appropriate sound frequency and speed path when speaking and you also seem comfortable which can be difficult for some speakers(like me). In addition, I like your conclusion especially when you said the reason why the young generation should know about Galaxy S4.
However, you looked a bit much the screen so if you have put less information but more images to help us understand more, it would have been greater.
Although I'm using iPhone, your topic is interesting me because Galaxy S4 is the newest model of Galaxy series and it is the most biggest of iPhone now. I have some issues on your powerpoint slides. I think it would be better to use some images in your powerpoint slides as 이주현 said, because providing its design or new functions by images or video is much more effective to understand and impress your audience rather than providing only text. Your speed of the speech sounds moderate and enough to follow you.
ReplyDeleteI was your video recorder and the only audience. I like your speech topic because it's very interesting to me. Also your structure is well organized. It would be better if you use some hand gestures when you were speaking. Thanks for good speech! :D
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