I really enjoyed your video clip because your topic, information about wine was very useful and "informative." Your strong point is a well-organized and well-prepared presentation. However, If you raise your voice a little bit, then your presentation will be more audible.
I enjoyed your presentation.^^* Your topic was very interesting and fresh.
And before starting your presentation, you started your presentation by giving us some questions and I liked it because it made me concentrate well to your presentation.
But I think it would be more better if you spoke a little bit more loudly.
Your presentation has lots of attraction. The subject was good, and the categories were also good. Furthermore, some slides that you prepared were really appropriate and informativw. But compare with the materials, your voice was a little bit small. I couldn't listen to your voice clearly. And if you stood in front of the desk or near the screen, I could see your body language and it would be more natural. I hope my feedback will be helpful for you.
I like your structure of your speech. It made me understand smoothly. Your visual aids were perfect to inform us. I think your voice was in proper speed. Thanks for informative speech. I really enjoyed it. :D
I really enjoyed your video clip because your topic, information about wine was very useful and "informative." Your strong point is a well-organized and well-prepared presentation. However, If you raise your voice a little bit, then your presentation will be more audible.
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ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your presentation.^^* Your topic was very interesting and fresh.
And before starting your presentation, you started your presentation by giving us some questions and I liked it because it made me concentrate well to your presentation.
But I think it would be more better if you spoke a little bit more loudly.
Your presentation has lots of attraction.
ReplyDeleteThe subject was good, and the categories were also good.
Furthermore, some slides that you prepared were really appropriate and informativw.
But compare with the materials, your voice was a little bit small. I couldn't listen to your voice clearly.
And if you stood in front of the desk or near the screen, I could see your body language and it would be more natural.
I hope my feedback will be helpful for you.
By Seung-Bum, Lee
I like your structure of your speech. It made me understand smoothly. Your visual aids were perfect to inform us. I think your voice was in proper speed. Thanks for informative speech. I really enjoyed it. :D
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