I liked that your voice was loud enough. I think you are always confident when you are giving presentations to others. The content was also very informative (rotating a fork clock-wise...etc)! There are minor grammatical errors ("this is(-> these are) some useful tips"...etc), however, they were understandble through the context and I do the same mistakes as well. If you try to reduce the errors I think you will be much better!:D - PUHA
I liked that your voice was loud enough. I think you are always confident when you are giving presentations to others. The content was also very informative (rotating a fork clock-wise...etc)! There are minor grammatical errors ("this is(-> these are) some useful tips"...etc), however, they were understandble through the context and I do the same mistakes as well. If you try to reduce the errors I think you will be much better!:D - PUHA
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